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Something I wrote...
I'm posting this because I know that I have some grammar issues to improve. Next Monday I'll start a new job where I have to use my written English skills so I decided to start practicing writing stories and today I came up with this...
The day is cold and the sky is fulfilled with clouds and a fog so heavy that blinds the city. There's nobody on the streets, just like a desert. It seems like some kind of strange force abducted everybody here. Finally, I decide to adventure myself and find out what happened there... A cold breeze blows like warning me what comes next. The solitude surrounds me and makes me shudder and the more I walk the scarier it gets. Suddenly I notice something strange on the floor, something red. Blood stains? I start to shake... The fear takes control of my body and I start to run as fast as I can. The road is confuse and I can't find a way out. I am lost, my heart beats hard and fast and I can't control my breath, I start to imagine things. I hear something... -somebody is moaning... Is this my imagination playing me a trick? And The moaning again... This time I'm sure, that sound was not my imagination! -Who's there? I asked. Nobody answered but the moaning again. Suddenly I see a shadow coming... I can only distinguish a silhouette and I start to freak out. The silhouette gets closer and closer, I am cornered in a dead end against a wall without escape. More silhouettes appearing from the shadows. Are they people? Why are they moaning? Oh my god!! They are zombies! I scream. Zombies everywhere, I'm surrounded without exit. The zombies gets closer and close. I'm gonna die!! I said. Suddenly I hear a phone ringing. A phone? Here? In the middle of nowhere? Everything turns black and finally I wake up on my bed! It was all a dream!!!!!!
I could continue writing this story with a greater end but It will be harder to correct so let's leave it that way.
Saludos a todos!
The day is cold and the sky is fulfilled with clouds and a fog so heavy that blinds the city. There's nobody on the streets, just like a desert. It seems like some kind of strange force abducted everybody here. Finally, I decide to adventure myself and find out what happened there... A cold breeze blows like warning me what comes next. The solitude surrounds me and makes me shudder and the more I walk the scarier it gets. Suddenly I notice something strange on the floor, something red. Blood stains? I start to shake... The fear takes control of my body and I start to run as fast as I can. The road is confuse and I can't find a way out. I am lost, my heart beats hard and fast and I can't control my breath, I start to imagine things. I hear something... -somebody is moaning... Is this my imagination playing me a trick? And The moaning again... This time I'm sure, that sound was not my imagination! -Who's there? I asked. Nobody answered but the moaning again. Suddenly I see a shadow coming... I can only distinguish a silhouette and I start to freak out. The silhouette gets closer and closer, I am cornered in a dead end against a wall without escape. More silhouettes appearing from the shadows. Are they people? Why are they moaning? Oh my god!! They are zombies! I scream. Zombies everywhere, I'm surrounded without exit. The zombies gets closer and close. I'm gonna die!! I said. Suddenly I hear a phone ringing. A phone? Here? In the middle of nowhere? Everything turns black and finally I wake up on my bed! It was all a dream!!!!!!
I could continue writing this story with a greater end but It will be harder to correct so let's leave it that way.
Saludos a todos!
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The day is cold and the sky is filled with clouds and a fog so heavy that it blinds the city. There's nobody on the streets, just like a desert. It seems like some kind of strange force has abducted everybody here. Finally, I decide to venture out to find out what happened there... A cold breeze blows like it is warning me of what comes next. The solitude surrounds me and makes me shudder and the more I walk, the scarier it gets. Suddenly I notice something strange on the floor, something red. Blood stains? I start to shake... Fear takes control of my body and I start to run as fast as I can. The road is confusing and I can't find a way out. I am lost, my heart beats hard and fast and I can't control my breathing, I start to imagine things. I hear something... somebody is moaning... Is this my imagination playing tricks on me? And the moaning again... This time I'm sure, that sound was not my imagination! -Who's there? I asked. Nobody answered, but the moaning again. Suddenly I see a shadow coming... I can only distinguish a silhouette and I start to freak out. The silhouette gets closer and closer, I am cornered in a dead end against a wall without an escape. More silhouettes appearing from the shadows. Are they people? Why are they moaning? Oh my God!! They are zombies! I scream. Zombies everywhere. I'm surrounded without a way to get out. The zombies get closer and closer. I'm going to die!! I said. Suddenly I hear a phone ringing. A phone? Here? In the middle of nowhere? Everything turns black and finally I wake up in my bed! It was all a dream!!!!!!
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What an interesting dream.....i almost thought it was real....Your writing skills are very good in english,you have but a few corrections.Finally,i decided to adventure myself and to find out what happens there or(what is happening there)....A cold breeze blew as if to warn me of what is happening next.
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